Maybury

I wrote this piece for a competition and happily I won. I do believe that it is going to be published on the university's website/ magazine, I'm not sure. But ...

I like it, it's simple, bouncey and fun, all can be very good things. :) Also anything that praises books, always good and will automatically interest me. I like the ...

I like this, it's simple and has a humour about itself. true some of the rhyme is obviously forced but it isn't that bad. I also like how you've taken ...

I love the style that you have, it has the ability to draw a reader in through intruige and interest. this piece is very emotional and I appreciate the vivid ...

even with the spelling mistakes, you have still proved that you have listened to the critiques you have been given and have used them to form yet another passionate piece. ...

another amazing story Lily. you can definatly can write so that the passion is evident to the reader in every sentence. As previously stated by the above, the multi-angle narritive ...

I like this Lily. simple format and it has very interesting imagery in it, also I do love anythime monsters are mentioned in anything :)

Better Things To Come And when we breathe symphonies we know our work is done and when our wings catch fire we know we flew too close to the sun ...