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Re: The Cadaver and the Column
I found a lot of interesting facts while researching this, some of which I will include on my walk. But they didn't really seem to fit the mood of the ...
Sep 23, 2020 -
Re: Her World Below
Andrew here’s for a quick review. This felt lick like a dream or a poem or a children's book but in a good way. I think if I were you ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Her World Below
ooops, it happened three times for some reason, that's really weird.
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Which Came First, Chicken or Egg?
I'm glad you like the poem! I found your interpretation is extremely interesting. It is similar to where I was coming from. I love when people ask questions, I hate ...
Sep 12, 2020 -
Re: Which Came First, Chicken or Egg?
Thanks for the review! I think that that is? idea is great. chicken, on the scale of things are new, but eggs are here since before things flew." Is that ...
Sep 12, 2020 -
Re: Which Came First, Chicken or Egg?
You can never read to much into a piece about poetry. I'm glad you picked up on the spiritual elements. That is what I was trying to communicate with the ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Which Came First, Chicken or Egg?
Cool, thanks for the feedback!
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Which Came First, Chicken or Egg?
Thanks for the review! Do you mean, 'on the scale of things' doesn't express the idea that chickens, though thousands of years old, like, compared to the earth, are super ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter 8
The little sneak peek was fun (;
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter 8
So, what happened to chapter eight?
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 2: A Fate Worse Than Death
You see, that is an example of my brain melting from me trying to do too much at once. Your first chapter was in the first person. I'm terribly sorry.
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Four
Cool, sorry I read the.
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Four
Wow, if she is I would start with her, not have three chapters of other characters. Because I feel like by the fourth chapter of a book the reader should ...
Sep 8, 2020 - Re: The Harvest - Chapter 7 Sep 6, 2020
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Re: Step One: Ordinary world
That's mood.
Sep 3, 2020
