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Hey Medusa! As promised, here's your critique. It is eleven minutes to midnight, and my canvas blinks back a whisper of atrocity. Combing It is to It's. And don't underling ...

Tony I shook my head lightly and the little green...thing fell off into my hands. I put him on the ground and stood back up. "I'm not a robot, no," ...

Done, Twit. Medusa, I'll start on yours tomorrow (July 2). I don't have time tonight. -May

Hey Twitty! I really like this story, but since everyone already covered everything for the first few chapters, I'll really only be critiquing this last chapter you have posted. And ...

Logan I glanced at the man in front of me, wondering where he had come from. He looked like one of the pirates from a couple hundred years ago. How ...

Open for requests! I will Critique: Fantasy Sci/Fi Historical Fiction Romance Action/Adventure Other Fiction Scripts Art/Photography I will not critique: Poetry Lyrics Non-Fiction Fanfiction What I fo

Jasper "It can't be a werewolf. It would smell different," I said, frowning. The other man was staring at us as though we had two heads. He had ordered everyone ...

Since apparently this is trying to make a comeback, I thought a DT would be a good thing to come back to. Ok, so, ideas?

Jasper I nodded politely to the man. "Sorry sir, but this is our baseball field. Your plane is located about three miles to the west, undamaged." I felt his anger ...

Billy, I've never read any books with Fiddler, so I'm not quite sure what to tell you. Is his world like ours, or completely different (geographically-wise). As for Jack...I don't ...

Actually, if we're going to a world where everyone already knows us, I don't think sunlight is going to make much difference. People are already going to know Edward and ...

Jasper Hale I smiled and hugged Alice quickly as she practically leaped into my arms. "Come on, let's get to the field and set up so we can start playing ...

Tony Stark (Iron Man) "Jarvis, you there?" There was a moments pause before the screens inches in front of my eyes lit up with the faint images of everything from ...

Meeting place! We still need a meeting place! Or an appearance place, at least. I think we should stick to the USA, seeing as that's where most of our actors/authors ...

:idea: To branch off of what Bella said... Our characters are thrown into the World as we know it today (maybe a not-too-far past/future). Villains are likewise now dwelling with ...