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Hey Ashie. Thought I'd drop by and offer a bit of help. It's been a while since I've critiqued anything of yours. ^.^ Corrections in red, Comments in blue. [spoiler]Otacon’s ...

Caius I waited outside for Hawthorn to finish with his speech, wanting nothing to do with a room full of cheering soldiers. The cloth on my finger remained a light ...

I saw it yesterday morning with my dad, and I must say it was definitely worth waking up for. Ledger did an amazing job as the Joker, as did Eckhart ...

Caius I gathered together everything I would need, which wasn't much, I admit. I owned very little in the first place, so what I took was only the bare essentials. ...

Zel I cringed slightly and turned to Lethero, holding my hands palm-out in front of me. I cast a glance behind me before turning back to him. "Uh...sir, let me ...

Zel I flew quickly towards where I knew my mother would be, hiding among the mist in the mountains. She wouldn't be happy to see me this soon, especially with ...

Name: Scaif Age: 22 Race: Wood Elf Gender: Male Birth Sign: Thief Skills: Light Armor, Alteration, Illusion, Security, Sneak, Acrobatics, Marksman. Attributes: Agility, Speed Stealth, Combat, or Magic

Caius- I picked at the cloth tied tightly around my finger. The monotonous sound of the King's voice sounded some unidentifiable distance to my right, though I had learned, after ...

Zel- I flew low over the clearing and changed forms midair, landing softly behind a bloody figure on the ground. I recognized who it was as he struggled to his ...

Hey Shel! Like I promised, here's my review. :wink: All corrections/additions are in Red. All Comments are in bold blue. Anything extra will be down below. [spoiler]I jump out of ...

Sorry Serenity, Caius was claimed by Bella already. She's going to post her profile later on. If, for some reason, she ends up not joining, I don't want to involve ...

Zel- I ran out of the house after Ryder, though I did not follow her to where she ran towards Lethero. I turned my eyes towards the sky and frowned ...

Name: Caius Age: 23 Race: Human Gender: Male Appearance- Build: Incredibly slim, scrawny and lanky. He has very little muscle whatsoever. Height: 6' Weight: 110 Eye Color: Pale blue, with ...

Congratulations to Sleeping Valor for becoming July's Greeter of the Month! This was an incredibly hard decision because there are so many outstanding Greeters out there. But Valor's greetings are ...

Thanks for all the replies, everyone! *Hands out muffins* Blacktiger>> We were actually at a fort in north Florida. I wish it had been Spain or Italy. ^.^ Choco>> They're ...