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uh...? very...interesting...

here's some i took over my christmas break... uh...*blushes*... how do u insert pics?

i personally liked it alot. it made me want to keep reading, and i like that about books (who doesn't?). Like Sam and ameliaoliver said, you do need to do ...

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thanks all! i'll fix those problems as soon as possible. i'm grateful for the suggestions!

Amazing. Simply amazing. I wish i could write like you. All in all, it was a great way to start off a book. I especially liked your prolouge, and i ...

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Thanks! i'll change those problems immediatly.

in answer to your questions, jennafina, you can call me DM, Dark, Magik, or Kaya. All those are fine. I enjoy writing about fantasy fiction. i am toying with the ...

Thanks, Pyxis. I'll keep that in mind. The names i'm using right now probably are not going to be the ones i'm going to end up using, but i'll keep ...

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I really liked it, Pyxis. I agree with Jennafina with what she said. Your story is very detailed and is definatly something i would want to read more of. Keep ...

hello all. I am quite new here, but have posted a few things here and there. I've been writing for a little over a year now, and am currently working ...

i liked it alot. i agree with Jennafina and all she posted, but i just want to add one thing. She hurriedly stows the egg into a leather drawstring bag ...