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A very good beginning. Im horrible at writing Crits, but i have to say, i cant wait to read more! Dark Magik~

yay! linds, me likey!

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Acro stood up and brushed his hands off. "Well, i for one think the plan is splendid, but it does have holes. But, they're minor and easily fixable." Reskid snorted. ...

*holy crap...this is confusing/unexpected/fun!* lol Kate let the others take her horse as she flew over them, scouting. After what happened to Arias, she wasn't taking any chances. *thats all ...

Name: Sturm Bightblade Age: 24 Race: Human Gender: Male Appearance: Long, brown hair and dark blue eyes. has a mustasche and wears ancient silver armor when in battle. Personality: Stern ...

whoops! i meant to post his with Caramons. i guess i forgot. ill go post it now, tho

"Who is this? Whats wrong with her?" Alje asked, following behind Raiana like a puppy. "An old friend." Raiana said worridly, turning Kailani over. "Ouch." Alje sucked in her breath ...

Kate and Lily stood poised before the doors, listening. "I'll help Tera, you get Arias. We can figure out where Alania from there." Kate said. Lily nodded and they both ...

*ah! im so confused. SORTA confused.* "Let me go first." Kate insisted. "No." Arias said, stepping in front of her. "Let me go first." Kate repeated. "No!"Arias said again. "Let...me...go...first." ...

"Oh, Tanis." Tika remembered. She reached into her apron and drew out a small scroll. "Someone delivered this today under strange circumstances." "Who was it?" Tanis asked, taking the scroll. ...

Raiana snatched one more minute of peace and opened her eyes. She blinked furiously, trying to rid the sleep scum from her eyes. She glanced around the camp and saw ...

"Wonderful." Kate said. She began to walk around and examine the surrounding forest. A few moments later she stated, "We're about a mile away to the east." "How do you ...

*nope, that was good.* Tas ran off to get them some ale. Raistlin receeded back into the shadows and Caramon, Flint, and Caramon began exchanging stories. "So where did you ...

Kate sighed and shook her head. "He's going to kill us!" she thought. She turned around and faced the guards. She sent a mental question to Alex (i think thats ...