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No no no no! Don't let this die! It's just getting good! Come on people! Dont let it die!

*Oh! *jumps up and down* i've always wanted to go to india! woot! lol, if you all dont mind, i am once again coming back in, this time hopefully to ...

*Alright, i give up. Editing my previous post back to what i originally had. hopefully it will be better.*

Windsurfing Nation by Broken Social Scene

5/10 meh.

6/10 meh.

Magik sits calmly in her booth in the corner, not even watching the mayhem around her. She rests her head on her arms which are folded on the table and ...

Alright. I edited it AGAIN, and so now It runs a bit more smoothly and it has more descriptions. I have chapters two and three up...chapter four soon to come ...

Nathaniel "I agree. We have little to no time." Nathaniel said. "We'll find food on the way. Come on, we have to go. We can't risk one of us getting ...

Nathaniel "Well then, we have no time to lose." Nathaniel said. He gripped his staff and took a shaking step forward. His brother grabbed his shoulder gently, but nonetheless, Nathaniel ...

Nathaniel Nathaniel closed his eyes and nodded slowly. "Now i remember..." "Remember what?" Gerard, Alise, and Bella all asked at once. A ghost of a smile played upon Nathaniel's lips. ...

Nathaniel "I'm so sorry Nat, I-I-I know where that stone is." Alise said as tears welled up in her eyes. "It's not your fault." he reassured her. "None of us ...

Gerard Gerard watched anxiously as Alise tended to Nat, watching his brother's face. Nathaniel's features flinched with pain but otherwise remained still. "Where are the others?" Gerard asked, noticin

Gerard Gerard carried his brother into the small room they shared, laying him down gently on his bed. When he removed his hands from his brother's back they were covered ...

Sure does! Thanks Jackie! ----------------------------------- Aramber looked down at the youth on the ground in front of him. The boy's dark green, frightened eyes stared up at him in fear. ...