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Nathaniel- I brought us back to the room that it seemed we had just left. We met no one on our way, of which i was thankful. I opened the ...

Gerard- "You have no idea how mad i am at you." I said sternly. She blushed and looked away. "I-I'm sorry..." I put my finger under her chin and lifted ...

Gerard- I lay still and quiet, listening to my breath enter and leave my body. "Funny," I thought. "I wouldn't have thought you had to breathe in the afterlife." I ...

Alje- I glanced at the human again. His claim only mildly astonished me. Griffins weren't the friendliest of creatures, i must admit, but they did take a specific liking to ...

me too? I have absolutely no idea where to come in...

Koby- I cowered under the dragon's terrible gaze. I gulped and held perfectly still until i felt the eyes move away from me. I ventured another uneasy question. I cursed ...

Alje- I growled again and laughed bitterly. "By the time you get back they'll have already left. That's why Lethero was in such a hurry to get back and threatened ...

Nathaniel- I opened my eyes slowly, blinking in the bright light of the midday sun beating down on my face. My vision was blurry but i was able to make ...

Gerard- I stepped back a pace and watched the fire in the vampire's eye grow. I knew i was in for it now. One quick glance at my brother and ...

Gerard- We had only exited the tower and walked out of the gates and through the woods when Alise ran into me. I stumbled back. "Alise?" I asked in disbelief, ...

We're all split up. My two characters are together with one of TN's characters away from everyone else's characters. Alje got mad at Lethero after he threatened to KILL her ...

(Me neider. :()

I'm gonna switch to first person. I just discovered the fun of it. ^^ and YAY! Bella's back! Woot woot! Nathaniel- Anger welled up inside of me; anger towards the ...

First off: Very good. I liked the style and it flowed pretty well. I only have a few suggestions, and they're only my personal opinion so it's up to you ...

Arial- I followed Almen through the dim dungeon passages until we came to a stop in front of two opposing groups. I recognized Areck and the rest of the Paradoxis ...