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I'm still here but not quite sure what to do right now... heh, sorry.

I'm not good at critiquing poetry, but this was really cute and made me giggle. Something i don't do often while reading. So i congratulate you on that. Keep it ...

Gerard- I'd have rather eaten something that harmed regular people, so i could do some good. "What about bears?" I asked. She shrugged. "A bit like wolf blood." "Ok, so ...

Gerard- "I'll never drink from a human." I vowed. "Only animals." We set off into the forest to find a suitable animal. *Dont have much*

Gerard- I sighed again. "I suppose." I looked around. "So...will you teach me how to hunt. I'm still not familiar with everything a vampire can do yet." "Sure," she said ...

*Sorry it's late, thing. My dad kicked me off without even letting me save what i had already done. But here's my crit.* Pretty good. You have the plot down ...

Pretty good. I'm no good at critiquing poetry, so I'll leave it to the pro's. But it flows pretty well and it talks about something everyone goes through in their ...

...Nat's a bad boy. Bad Nat. Time out for you. Gerard- I sighed "I'm not necessarily worried about him. Just...i can't believe he'd...he'd..." i couldn't go on. The mere thought ...

Nathaniel- As much as i hated to admit it, she had a point. Not about Gerard killing himself...but about my decision being ridiculous. In a way. I knew Gerard wouldn't ...

Gerard- I stared at the spot where my brother had disappeared blankly, not believing what had just happened. I sank down into the grass. I felt Alise's presence next to ...

Nathaniel- I sighed quietly, blinking to rid the tears from my eyes. I suppose now would be the best time to tell her...if there really was a best time... "Gerard ...

Nathaniel- I mentally slapped myself on the head...hard. "Bella," I said, barely concealing my laughter. Trust Bella to be able to make me laugh in even the worst situations. "Look ...

Nathaniel- I sat for a few moments after Bella left, too numb to move. Then awareness washed over me, and with that came a wave of panic. Why did i ...

James- I stopped in my tracks and glanced up quickly. I had no idea there had been anyone near me. A quick glance around told me i was near the ...

Koby- "Kairie," I said, stepping closer to her. "I need you to vouch for me." She glanced sharply at Alje and Senra. "Why? What for?" I coughed lightly. prove I'm ...