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Re: My Photos and crummy drawings.
Hello, Swottielottie. These are some nice pictures, but almost all of them are blurry. I don't know if you purposefully made them like this... (1) I like the picture, but ...
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Re: Deleted
I'll be critiquing as i read... “Okay.” I pushed Sasha away. As great as she was being, I was feeling like I wanted to fall into her arms and break ...
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Re: Space Pockets
I'll be critiquing as i read... At that moment a stocky, balding man waddled toward him with a digital readout tablet. It was a device which wouldn't come out to ...
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Re: Deleted
I'll be critiquing while i read. Remember, this is just my opinion, so if you want, feel free to disregard all of it. It’s hard to realize just how much ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Riley- I wrapped my wings around Ariana again and laid my chin on the top of her head. "It seems we are getting more help than expected. That is a ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Natan- My own eyebrows shot up. "Are you offering us help, O Half-Dragon?" i asked playfully. He smiled. "That i am." "Then i most humbally accept." i said, bowing and ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Natan- The door to my room opened yet again, Admitting the girl i had healed earlier and her brother. I walked forward to greet them. "Hello." "Hi." Velna said. "I ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Davnix- I knocked on the door to Natan's room and let myslf in, leaving the door open so that Riley could follow. I blinked when i saw Natan spring up ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Davnix- I smiled, wrote a quick note and dropped it on the table. "Right, lets go." Riley stood quickly, bringing Ariana up too. We exited through the front door and ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Riley- I blinked. She wanted me to help her find a demon? Me? Of all people...? "Ah, well, I'd be MORE than happy to help, but i don't know what'd ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Riley- I held Ariana as she clung to me tightly, shaking every once in a while. I listened as Alise told me the horrific story. When she was done, i ...
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Re: Black and White
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Natan- I walked calmly into my house as Val slipped off into the shadows, hovering close to the wall. I smiled at her reassuringly before shutting the door and turning ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Riley- Alise and Gerard exchanged glances and Ariana hugged me tighter. I had a feeling i would've been better off not asking, but once again my tongue had spoken before ...
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Re: Anything Goes
Nic- I froze as her lips touched mine lightly and she whispered words that shot through me like iron daggers. She drew back slightly, watching me curiously, waiting to see ...
Jan 2, 2008
