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Riley- I saw her eyes widen, though i could not tell what emotion danced across their mirror-like surface. I smiled tentatively. "How?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. ...

Hey Jabber! Seeing as Valor already covered the grammatical mistakes, i don't really have much to say except this was really good and fun to read. I must say, however, ...

I'll join. And since no one seems to like being a Dwarf, i'll be one. Name: Alabaster (Call him Al) Age: 125 Race: Dwarf Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: His personality ...

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Hey Canis! This was pretty good! I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and you started your story off well and left the reader wanting to learn more. I ...

Hello lin night. First off: Please, please, please go back through this and look for any grammatical errors. There are many, but nothing really major. Second: Like SeraphTree said, you ...

Hi Kadie! Welcome to YWS! I'm Ariel, though feel free to call me whatever you'd like. Don't sweat about not being able to finish stuff or not being the best ...

Hi, Fall_Into_The_Sky! Welcome to YWS. I'm Ariel, though feel free to call me whatever you'd like. If you have any questions or concerns regarding the site, feel free to PM ...

Riley- I nodded slowly. "That i can understand... but flying, well, you have control over how high or low you want to go, where you want to go, and you ...

Riley- I felt Ariana shudder against me and chuckled softly. "Don't worry, love, i won't let you fall. You have nothing to fear." She shifted against me. "It's not falling-well, ...

Riley- We traveled to the cave as quickly as possible (for Val's sake) and i quickly got a fire going. Val laid Natan in a dark corner and retreated away. ...

Squishing myself back in here... Riley- I wrapped my wings around Ariana affectionately, brushing my lips lightly against her hair. It shimmered and glowed in the soft moonlight spilling from ...

I'm going to be stepping out of this one, guys. I can't keep up. Sorry! -Mays

Skyler- I shifted my weight impatiently from one foot to another, examining the rest of the contestants. I noticed there was one in front of me (how convenient, i thought) ...

Riley- "Ah, i see. Well, that's pretty cool." I said, smiling. I walked us over to where Isabella and Natan stood, Natan's eyes glittering in anger. "How's it going?" i ...