Maya

I liked this. And you shouldn't put yourself down so harshly. You have a natural talent and this poem reflects the feelings a lot of teens have about themselves. Well ...

Thank you everyone for your feedback. It seems that I have a few rhythm issues and yes, some of the rhyming words are a bit forced. I do know that ...

She watches over me at night, stopping all of my frights. Her elegant sight, is a wonderful delight. I like this. The rhyme and the flow work well in this ...

On Wednesday afternoon At almost five to four God did something awful That should be against the law He reached down from the heavens And took something of mine When ...

Ok, first of all, before I tell you some of the things I thought were...random about your poem, let me just say it has a really good rhythm and I ...

ok, before I start analyzing your poem let me just say...I think it is good and I like the ending. tip-toeing at midnight in the darkness, the child stepped on ...

You'd like to know more about me? Sure, no problem. There are tons of things I can say. My favourite colour (I'm not sure if this is an American site ...

Heya My name is Maya but most people ditch the "A" and just call me May instead (no not the second "A" because that would make my name Mya and ...