Maya

hi there Sonny (lol) My name is Maya (obviously) and I am happy to welcome you to YWS. These forums totally rock and anyone who likes writing (or even people ...

I thought this was good for a short, simple poem and I am guessing it is about a person running away from an attacker. You know there's the running and ...

Outside, the fresh air cleared my head and I suddenly realised what a stupid mistake I was making. I squeezed my eyes shut and rubbed my temples before letting out ...

there is not really much I can say that has not already been said. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and I loved the opening paragraph, even if the story didn't ...

thanks for reviewing it. you did a great job, considering you've never read twilight...haha Anyway, I was sort of thinking that in the next chapter, Bella decided she can't leave ...

Thanks. I am an Australian and we spell realised with an "s" but it can be spelled both ways. I will try to write more and yes, I did repeat ...

Thanks so much for reviewing this. You see...when I write, I like to sort of go with the flow and that's what happened here. In my head I am writing ...

Hello and welcome to the forum :) You shouldn't be shy about publishing your writing. Just go for it, you never know what people might say and even if it's ...

I remember the black skies, the way you trembled as the thunder roared overhead. I remember that look in your eyes when the lightning lit up your face. Fear, that's ...

I would say....wow, we were busy last night! Haha If you were caught in a flood and holding hands with a member of your family and your best friend but ...

thanks for reviewing my poem. You know how you said it would sound better with an "a" in that sentence? Well, it's supposed to have one was just a typing ...

hey, this is good. I like it. There are few small grammatical/spelling errors that I will try to point out so you can improve it even more. I know when ...

Chapter 1 'Happy Birthday Bella!' my husband said, coming into the room balancing a breakfast tray in one hand and our daughter in the other. He handed me the tray ...

It hides in the rain Running down my window, In the toys I refuse to throw out It hides under tree Where a loved pet is buried, In the petals ...

Yes, everything that need to be said was written in previous replies but I would like to tell you that I thought it was very good, if a little too ...