MattLangg

I really like the message this is conveying ^.^ You can't be truly free, until you think in your head that you're free, very deep! Just a few things; Freedom ...

Untangling the strings of a mangled past. Opening new doors as we look through the glass. You can see the fire as it pops and crackles. And a shine that ...

I absolutely love this ^.^ You build the listener's tension as the poem progresses, then the ultimate conclusion is magnificently crafted! A couple of things; You are the flower of ...

Thought I'd help with the punctuation ^.^ W e had a dream - of ruling all the seven seas . T he dream was fought for but we lost her ...

This is very unique! Just a few things I'd like to point out; Shoes Oh how many different types of shoes there are! They house your feet and cover your ...

Thanks guys! ^^

Your angelic, soft hair, and your shimmering brown eyes. Your sweet voice, flowing in the air, was what made me realize; There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more ...

This is very good, it reminds me of the hustle and bustle of a New York City street, but I don't know why. The only thing that I would recommend ...

O.o This started out okay, then it got intense. I don't know what else to say about something like this. I do like it, however. I enjoy how it has ...

I'm lovin' the effort, Morgan. haha xD

Oh my, this story was absolutely magnificent. I started out reading expecting to stop halfway through. Instead, I couldn't even think about stopping! I love your sensory details, and the ...

As I was reading this, I had a feeling of dread, or longing for something I can't obtain. Those themes led to a very appropriate ending, making the poem piece ...

Thank you for your opinion! However, if you read the poem out loud, you will notice the subtlety of the rhyming. I prefer to rhyme the middle of words, such ...

Thanks! I was trying to rhyme the "ar" noise inside the words, but I guess it didn't have that effect.

Trying to break my own knife, and failing to dust my lost pen. To write this pain, that's so hard to swallow, as it creeps up my throat again. The ...