MattLangg

But it's bloodshed - the taking away of life. The taking away of life is a sin. But it's worth it if it's my own life.

It's a letter to myself.

Dear Matthew, The girl you truly love doesn't know the real you. But the worst of it all; I don't think that even you do. You're putting on a front ...

This poem made me laugh! It definitely does have a prominent moral, "Don't cheat!" or maybe.. "What goes around comes around!"

I thought this was pretty interesting, but I feel as though you could definitely add a lot more. Maybe help explain why she has the names she's been given, for ...

But, here's some grammatical things ^.^ What hurts the most Is what's untrue . The thing that's haunting Is me without you. Right now my world is perfect ; My ...

Love, this is my favorite of anything you've ever written. It's spectacular in every way. I Love it

Two shattered hearts, and one broken dream. Nothing was ever as it seemed. Your watery eyes, my drowning sorrows. Just like before, my heart is hollow. And the passion that ...

I remember reading this , I was such a fan of the series ^.^ I think you did an excellent job of summarizing the book in poem form! I really ...

I really liked this ^.^ The symbolism was my favorite! Just a few things: I’d like to be a star in the fallen sky, Watch the world change as time ...

I actually just wrote this in Christology class out of boredom haha I think I have lost all interest in this, and I'm going to replace it.

This is slightly different than anything I've written before, so critiquing is helpful! A golden lining on a black sun is a special occasion marveled at by many. The past ...

Don't change anything. Ever

I simply did it because the reviewer before you asked me to.

Well, this one has a lot of meaning to it... I'll explain it stanza by stanza. Untangling the strings of a mangled past. Opening new doors as we look through ...