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Re: We All knew It Would Happen In The End
Two can play at this game, but only one can win. Now things can never be the same. Why'd you bring him up again? You said that he was gone, ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
This is a great poem! I love where you got your inspiration from. It just goes to show that anything can inspire you, you just have to look at it ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Bruised and Bloodied, We Wipe the Tears Away
Thank you! Yes, I repeated it because this is in fact a song I've written. haha
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Bruised and Bloodied, We Wipe the Tears Away
Thank you very much! I just edited it a whole lot - adding a lot more imagery. Thanks again!
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Bruised and Bloodied, We Wipe the Tears Away
I gave you my trust and like shattered glass you broke it. I whispered you my hopes and like a young boy you let me down. I handed you my ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: If You Saw the World How I Do.
If You Saw the World How I Do, you would see that a single ice crystal, fallen from the sky, is a world on which I live upon. It melts ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Face Down In The Dark
Ahhh I really liked this ^.^ I'm just guessing, but did you write on this topic because of personal experience? Or did something else inspire you? It sways in the ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Listening to a Friend (Getting Over It)
Everyone has different outlooks, different experiences, and different personalities. Maybe you do know what I feel - maybe you don't. That's not the point. The point is to feel what ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Listening to a Friend (Getting Over It)
You left my bruised and bloody body in a life as cold as winter. I was the ice on a deserted tundra. The white world around me flashed by my ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
When adversity stares you right in the face, When time stands so still as if locked in one place, Will you stare back? Will you seize the day? If a ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Everything In Between Us
I absolutely adore this. It's short, sweet, and yet it has a booming effect on the reader. This is the powerful poetry that you see featured in literature books used ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Never Look Back
Never look back, You won't like what you see. The present is not the same, once it becomes history. The people you once knew, and the ones you called lovers, ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: When Nothing Else Matters
When I get inspired, it's usually from something I want to do very badly. Inspiration for this.... Taking a spring walk with the one I love.
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: More Than the World
This was very pretty ^.^ I loved the random rhyming; it makes the poem seem so cute and innocent. Then again, love is it's best when it's innocent :D Keep ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not Like Those Who Hurt You
Disregard the other comments, I know what you're trying to say. It all makes sense now, and you know what else makes sense? You and I; we make sense. I ...
Mar 15, 2011
