Mathlete

Well you can use the genericish limerick that people always refer to: Pattern "A" There once was a man from Peru Pattern "A" Who dreamed he was eating his shoe ...

I never write swear words in my writings, but it can really add voice and emotion to the characters as well as make them seem realistic. I hate books that ...

I thought that it was pretty good. It had a definite rhythm to it, which can be hard to do well. I liked your word choice especially, but the rhymes ...

Thanks Scasha! I've been desperate for people to critique my work for a while. I guess I need to go back and revise some things now.

Here's a limerick that I wrote in 5th grade. It's not very good, but my teacher thought it was funny at the time. Feel free to comment on it. There ...

Pretty good writing, but there are a few grammatical errors. The serpentine movement of the fluid that made it’s migration south was all that she could think on. its instead ...

I thought that it was really good. It isn't poetry in the way that most people think of it, but there's nothing wrong with that. Personally, I like your use ...

OK, it wasn't exactly bad, but it wasn't [s]good[/s] average either. It really had almost nothing to do with fire either. And I'm not saying I don't like pie, but ...

I can't decide whether or not I should write about this next. My friends have liked the idea, but I'd like to know other peoples' opinions. Here's a description of ...

Nice Writing! I especially liked all of the descriptions. Your dialog seemed natural, and it reflected the conflict. There were just a few minor things that could be changed. He ...

Well, I guess I should introduce myself too. You can call me Mathlete, but just ignore the math part. I like writing also. I mostly write fantasy, and what I'm ...

Personally, I like the third. The first is good, but there's something interesting about Those Slain Lie Famous . It might be that it's true in some instances, or maybe ...

I started writing actual stories when I was in 1st grade. I was fortunate enough to have teachers who let students write when I was younger. The first story I ...

That idea is sort of similar to an assignment I sometimes do in school. The results can get pretty wierd, but it's always fun to do.

PROLOGUE The cold night air was completely still as a hooded man rode up on his armored black stallion. The emerald ring on his finger glinted in pale moonlight. Though ...