Mathlete

I'm not going to talk about grammar or spelling, just the writing itself. First of all, you have fantastic imagery, and great word choice. Just remember to not overuse adjectives ...

This is a really old thread. *begins typing* I wish I had a fire-beathing cow. It could destroy my nemeses and I'd have all the dairy products I'd ever need! ...

I've got a few pretty good ones: First Time in your pants Maniac in your pants Stand in your pants The Great Beyond in your pants Waiting in your pants ...

What if there was a force other than gravity known only to me that could negate the effects of gravity, (pause to stroke chin in quiet contemplation) allowing me to ...

It has to be 'til! How would you get the second "l" in til out of "until"? Besides, the question isn't really 'til vs. till, it's un til vs. un ...

This is just a picture I took while I was cross-country skiing near the administration building on the U of I campus.

I think that was a typo. I meant "buy" instead of "but". Thanks for catching that.

I thought it was pretty good, or at least better than the first part. There are still quite a few mistakes, though. “What happened to your neck?” was the first ...

Great writing! Definitely worth a star! I didn't notice any mistakes in it either. I normally don't like non-fiction, but this was really good. Oh I know, I know! Pick ...

That was pretty good. I didn't especially like your rhyming choices, but that can be really hard to do sometimes. I really liked your repetition at the end, but it ...

I liked it quite a bit. :) It had pretty good detail, and the first person perspective added personality to the character. I especially liked the ending, because it adds ...

6/10 But what if she's captured by evil gnomes and taken to a secret underground hick-town in Texas known as MOLEVILLE

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

That's really long. You might want to break it up into to parts if you want people to read it all. I just skimmed the first part of it. It's ...

I downloaded chapter 1 and I just finished editing it. I didn't really revise it very much, but I make very many revisions, but I posted suggestions on the side ...