Master_Yoda

Wow, everyone here seems to love this series. I found the first book pretty slow, and I didn't find it any better than mediocre. By the third one however, Trudi ...

A really nice piece of writing. Here are a few minor tips: The humans claim creation, but really all they can claim is surrogacy – being the carriers for the ...

This is such a hard question to answer. So many to choose from :). I'll have to give a top 5 in no particular order: 1) Ender's Game -- Orson ...

The worst book ever: Brisingr -- I read through over 700 pages of this drivel, and not one thing exciting or otherwise happened throughout the book. The second worst book ...

Hi Turity A very interesting piece to read. Here are a few pointers that I believe can make it even better. It was strange falling asleep after eighteen years of ...

The first point that needs to be made about your story is that it is very hard to read. What makes it so hard to read is the lack of ...

Hi There, This was quite an intriguing start to a piece of writing. There are several good images used throughout the passage, and this piece therefore has great potential. There ...