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  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    If you opened this book at the bookshop, I applaud you, you have likely just saved yourself $7.00.

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Who is Pat Bunchana?!!

    Pat Buchanan is a politician. Here is the Wikipedia link for the article on him:

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Snake's game..

    Hi Mia, Just so you know, there is a rule here about posting two reviews before posting a piece of your own work. Its also advised that a ratio of ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Would you rather?

    I'd rather them know that I'm on YWS. Would you rather read Twilight twice, or Eragon twice?

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Snow White and the Seven Dwarves

    I think that there are parts of this poem that definitely need work, but I was in a playful mood this morning, so I decided to write this, in the ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 10

    Wow CastlesInTheSky, I don't really know what to say. This is really overwhelming. From beginning to end, your writing kept me glued to my seat. You writing is so beautiful; ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Help!

    Hi Sofi, I'm not sure if he would have read Lance Armstrong's book -- It's not About the Bike: My Journey Back to Life, but its a really nice book, ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord

    Wow, everyone here seems to love this series. I found the first book pretty slow, and I didn't find it any better than mediocre. By the third one however, Trudi ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Mutts - Years

    A really nice piece of writing. Here are a few minor tips: The humans claim creation, but really all they can claim is surrogacy – being the carriers for the ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Dungeon

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    This is such a hard question to answer. So many to choose from :). I'll have to give a top 5 in no particular order: 1) Ender's Game -- Orson ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    The worst book ever: Brisingr -- I read through over 700 pages of this drivel, and not one thing exciting or otherwise happened throughout the book. The second worst book ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: What In The Jiminy Cricket Is Twilight?

    I guess I can't really judge twilight, as I put it down after the first 10 pages, but my impression of it was a plotless lame piece of writing. But ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Faded- Prologue

    Hi Turity A very interesting piece to read. Here are a few pointers that I believe can make it even better. It was strange falling asleep after eighteen years of ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Heist -- Chapter 1

    Thanks for reviewing Light_Devil :). You actually have no idea how much you helped me edit the story. That piece of advice about changing the "bumped" to "ran" was brilliant. ...

    Dec 8, 2008


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