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Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
If you opened this book at the bookshop, I applaud you, you have likely just saved yourself $7.00.
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Who is Pat Bunchana?!!
Pat Buchanan is a politician. Here is the Wikipedia link for the article on him:
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Snake's game..
Hi Mia, Just so you know, there is a rule here about posting two reviews before posting a piece of your own work. Its also advised that a ratio of ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Would you rather?
I'd rather them know that I'm on YWS. Would you rather read Twilight twice, or Eragon twice?
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Snow White and the Seven Dwarves
I think that there are parts of this poem that definitely need work, but I was in a playful mood this morning, so I decided to write this, in the ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Broken - 10
Wow CastlesInTheSky, I don't really know what to say. This is really overwhelming. From beginning to end, your writing kept me glued to my seat. You writing is so beautiful; ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Help!
Hi Sofi, I'm not sure if he would have read Lance Armstrong's book -- It's not About the Bike: My Journey Back to Life, but its a really nice book, ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord
Wow, everyone here seems to love this series. I found the first book pretty slow, and I didn't find it any better than mediocre. By the third one however, Trudi ...
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Re: Mutts - Years
A really nice piece of writing. Here are a few minor tips: The humans claim creation, but really all they can claim is surrogacy – being the carriers for the ...
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Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Dungeon
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
This is such a hard question to answer. So many to choose from :). I'll have to give a top 5 in no particular order: 1) Ender's Game -- Orson ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The worst book ever: Brisingr -- I read through over 700 pages of this drivel, and not one thing exciting or otherwise happened throughout the book. The second worst book ...
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Re: What In The Jiminy Cricket Is Twilight?
I guess I can't really judge twilight, as I put it down after the first 10 pages, but my impression of it was a plotless lame piece of writing. But ...
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Re: The Faded- Prologue
Hi Turity A very interesting piece to read. Here are a few pointers that I believe can make it even better. It was strange falling asleep after eighteen years of ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: The Heist -- Chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing Light_Devil :). You actually have no idea how much you helped me edit the story. That piece of advice about changing the "bumped" to "ran" was brilliant. ...
Dec 8, 2008
