Master_Yoda

Favorite (as of yesterday): Criminy. (Its an exclamation used by one of Terry Brooks's Characters in the word and the void). Least Favorite: Dude -- It just sounds so... colloquial?

I don't have to be a human do I? If I do, please PM me, and I'll change my character. Name: Jiminy Cricket Age: Irrelevant Description: Other: Is in fact, ...

Well, there isn't much to critique around here. I really enjoyed the poem. The candid way that you refer to death, creates a strong progression, and somehow magically draws the ...

Hi Kitty15 Firstly, I want to compliment you on your writing, as it is in fact, in my humble opinion spectacular. Here are a series of nitpicks. Hopefully they will ...

Hey oneeyedunicornhunter, You're not alone in being a Dune fan. I have only read Dune, Dune Messiah, and Children of Dune, but I really did enjoy all of them. While ...

Well, this is fairly confusing. There is a strong chance that you look like a dinosaur ;). If you don't than perhaps an animé character with a tail and cat's ...

Hello Before I even begin my review, I'd like to suggest that you give us a little more information regarding the world. You have thrown us into the action of ...

Thanks so much Rosey Unicorn, I think I'm going to do just that! Of course there will be alterations to your plan. In fact, I'm going to do it while ...

I don't know how many of you have used the Stumble Upon utility, which I got for my Firefox 3 browser. After it had seen what sights I liked to ...

Hi Lukas 8u I have attatched a .doc file with an edited version of your story. I enjoyed it very much, and feel that it has a lot of potential. ...

I am writing a bank robbery, and am struggling to find a scientifically viable way of breaking into a bank vault without attracting too much attention. At the moment, I ...

My pleasure, If there is anything more I can do to help please PM me. If a werewolf is humanoid, then I don't think claw fits the definition too well ...

True, kitties never scratch. I won't mention a certain episode that I had with a full grown cat. It was scary. TPBM writes a lot of fantasy.

phantom_blackfire_wings: is it Casey? I'll be seriously impressed if anyone can get mine the clues are: a) its Hebrew b) it starts with a Y and ends with an A

Hi there, Here are my two cents on the story: Moonlight pierced through the cloudless night sky to illuminate the small, deciduous forest around the silhouette. He walked slowly along ...