Master_Yoda

Hi Matthemus Welcome to YWS. I'm sure you will make yourself at home here. Now with out further ado, here's the review. :) In your prologued, you have successfully highlighted ...

Round 46: Nate Vs. Obama Nate and Obama both enter the arena to standing ovations. Nate has the first shot: He pulls out a blaster and shoots Obama, but Obama ...

While I don't really follow soccer much anymore, when I do, I support Arsenal. But we ain't doing that well at the moment... :(

I often get urges to write perfect characters, but I tend to quash those urges as fast as I can. I don't do this because I find them boring to ...

Hi Sapsan Firstly, I'd like to compliment you on your ability to paint a picture of what is happening so adeptly. I'm not going to nitpick your story, but I ...

To be perfectly honest I've only ever named two of my possessions. The first of these is my toothbrush, and the second is my Scientific Calculator. I named my toothbrush, ...

Hi Horserider This is a really nice start. You writing is strong, and your narration is sound. I'm not really sure of the effect that you're trying to create here ...

Banned because one of the mods was in a particularly bad mood. :)

Hello Again As per your request, here is my edit. I hope it helps. Have a good one! :)

Hello there Welcome to YWS. Now let's start the review. This piece is short, so I don't suggest that I will do it justice. But let's take what we have ...

Hi Everyone I thought the Kite Runner was a brilliant work of literary genius, and was blown away by its depth and attention to detail with regard to emotions and ...

I usually do listen to music when I'm writing. There are times when I don't because I need to concentrate intently on the scene, but under normal circumstances listening to ...

Hi There, Well done on crafting such a piece. I really find it to be beautiful, and heart wrenching at the same time. the boy gripped swishing his shaggy auburn ...

To the... lost property, usually. Why do people ask such weird questions?

Zimbabwe Yay, I finished it :)