Master_Yoda

I have to say Light_Devil, this was a seriously solid idea. I don't really have much time to review it now, but here are the thoughts that come immediately to ...

8/10 It's really dark. Cool!

Hey there Mark, and welcome to YWS. I'm sure that you will find this community helpful and friendly. Plus the reviews here are better than they are anywhere on the ...

Wow Adnamarine you write extraordinarily. In fact I think I had to read this about five times before I had an "ink"ling of what was actually going on. And even ...

Hi anti-pop This is a really great piece. I really like the way that you've captured your characters. Even from this short piece, I already feel like I know them. ...

On writing dialogue: Eavesdrop on as many conversations as you can. Perhaps even take notes as you eavesdrop. On writing a character: Become the character, and nothing you can do ...

Hi there ChasingColts, Welcome to YWS! Humor is probably the most difficult genre to write. I say this because not everyone shares the same sense of humor, and because being ...

Hi Starlene I must say that I really like this. You write a fairly strong prose, and really know how to draw the reader's focus. Your piece has already been ...

Hi there Archer, While I'm not going to rave about how brilliant this was, I will indeed attempt to provide some tips that I hope will help you improve it. ...

Under most circumstances I Pat Buchanan. Yet on the rare occasion tthat Pat Buchanan is not available, I ????

11. In the days of my youth, I was told what it means to be a man. I know that one straight away. Led Zeppelin -- Good times, Bad times. ...

Hi ConfusingSillyLittleGirl It's nice to know that I'm not the only South African here. I don't really think I've seen you around, but I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. You ...

Cute avatar. 8/10

Hi Armagan, Welcome to the Young Writers Society. Just to inform you that we do have a rule that before we post a piece of our own, we review two ...

I know what I'm picking up next time I get to a bookstore. I can't wait to read this. I can't believe you didn't like Speaker for the Dead etc. ...