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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Shady Debate

    Hey Peanut This was a pretty cute story. It doesn't make much sense, but it's not really meant to, so that is fine. One or two nitpicks: I am am ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Piper Legend (Prologue~Edited)

    Hi There Let's get to the review: All down the streets Brigitta dances, joyfully and nonchalantly to the sound of the cappella melody played by the Piper. Is the word ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    Hi Moria Leila I would greatly appreciate a review for this piece: Thanks so much! :)

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dreams of Giants

    EDIT: Thanks to my reviewers, the first draft of my story has been edited. It can be viewed here: [spoiler]I have asked the question thousands of times. I have answered ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: March Greeter of the Month: Meep(:

    Congratulations Meep! Well Done! You really deserve the honor! :)

    Mar 8, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Baroness, The Villainess

    Hello Sumi! You complain about your ability to hook, but you've done a great job here. :) There were only two things in the world a man like Edgar should ...

    Mar 8, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: So, you think you can write?

    After a couple of months of reviewing random stuff, I have decided to start one of these thing-a-majigs. So If you want a review from me, just post here. It ...

    Mar 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Stats, Stats, Stats! 2008 v. 2007 & January 2009

    Damn! South Africa never made it. Well, I guess we are just a little country on the edge of Deep Dark Africa. :( South Africa was number 13 in January, ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Letting go *edited*

    Hello Dudette! Let's get straight to the review. I have to say that I think that your twist was sheer genius. I really like the entire story. Nervously, I glanced ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Stats, Stats, Stats! 2008 v. 2007 & January 2009

    Damn! South Africa never made it. Well, I guess we are just a little country on the edge of Deep Dark Africa. :(

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 10-17 letter word

    scintillating? lmao. I laughed hard at this one. :lol: Funny! Okay, I think I've recovered. ;)

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: The Ultimate 'I need a name' Place

    The site I use is located here: It really is a great site for names. :)

    Mar 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Essay "Inside the Circle"

    Hi 84Moss, Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll have a most pleasant stay! You haven't really given us much to work with here. I don't know much about breakdancing, But ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Cousin Benjamin

    Wow, anti-pop! You've got another golden star for this piece for sure. ;) So my cousin and I went out on a trip To walk along the Cliffs of Insanity ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Tuning Fork, Chapter 1 - 5 am

    Hi timeless, I expect this review to be short, and only because you've done such an astounding job that you need very little help with this piece. I don't really ...

    Mar 5, 2009


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