Master_Yoda

Hi Sureal This piece of yours is fairly intriguing. This is quite strange as it seems to have no drive whatsoever. It seems to merely account a lucid dream. I'm ...

I hope it's not too late to join. If it is please just PM me, and ignore my post. So, there are no Hobbitses? Well, time to change that! NAME: ...

Hello once again Julie, Your story is clearly intriguing. And in this one, the paragraphing is good, and easy to read. So, let's review the piece itself. "Viva," the man ...

Hi Once again :) Can I request a review for the edited version of my above piece: But more importantly than that, can you review the first part of the ...

Hey Matthemus, Rubin, and Dreamworx Thanks so much for the reviews! :) It seems that the biggest complaint here is my lack of description of setting and characters. So, with ...

Shadow Puppets by Orson Scott Card.

Hello, I was wondering if you would kindly review this piece: Thanks so much!

A/N: You don't really need to read the prologue to understand this, but if anyone wants to read it, it can be found here: . Let the story begin! The ...

Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I hope you find your stay most pleasant. :) On with the review: I think that you write very nicely indeed. Your prose, while not ...

Hi Julie You haven't really given me much grammar to correct whatsoever. In fact, the only thing that made your story even a little bit of a chore to read ...

Occasionally I do find that I put a lot of myself into the characters. The way that I try to make my characters unique is to take real people, and ...

Hi jBlack_girl This piece is really short. It does, however, unlike many other pieces of its length give us a real lot to work with. So, hopefully after this review, ...

Come on! doesn't anyone want to give me anything to review?

Hi there Johnny Welcome to YWS! In case you have not been informed, we do have a rule at YWS to ensure that everyone gets work reviewed. Before we post ...

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