Master_Yoda

Now this is an interesting question, because quite honestly under usual circumstances I'd rather have an epic plot with cliched characters. When however a character is so eccentric, interesting, or ...

Oh my, Georgia, this is truly wonderful. Your description is riveting, your prose strong, and your style magical. Just one or two suggestions that may or may not improve your ...

Oh, so this is what the tavern looks like. Oh well, it doesn't look too different from the rest of YWS...

I've been thinking that it might be a good idea to have a thread to tell everyone else about a story in the Literary forums that you think is worth ...

Hi Lil_Pau What a great start to a story! Let's see what we can do to improve it though... a mass of debris and destruction on the ground. Buildings looked ...

Hi there Selene, What... Oh, yes... I'm here to do a review. So, let's get started then. You know when you know what you’re doing is really stupid, but you ...

Hi There Overall, I'd have to say that this is a pretty nice piece. I hope that this review will manage to sharpen the image that you have tried to ...

I tend to have this problem all the time. I don't know what it is, but I like to describe my main character himself from another person's point of view. ...

A/N: Sorry about the short sections, but I find that reviews are better if I post them like this. Enjoy this next installment. The horse reared up on it's hind ...

Whenever I look back at something I've written I get a big shock: Most of it is atrocious. But I keep writing telling myself that it will improve over time. ...

Yrclever watched the crazy Llama approaching from the other end of the dirt road. "Help!" the Llama screamed in a sexy feminine voice, "Snoink is missing." "Calm down lady," yrclever ...

Okay, Well, if you do want to do another review, I suppose I can let you do mine ;). I mean please do this: *gets down onto his knees and ...

Hey there Rosey, Can I have a review on this please: I'll even give you virtual cookies. :)

Very nice Meep :) I don't like reviews that pretty much say "I loved this", but you should know that I love this. The relationship between the woman and the ...

When I think weird and book, two books immediately come to mind. One is called River Boy, I can't remember who wrote that one. The second is the Earthsea Cycle ...