Master_Yoda

Hey Ofir Welcome to YWS. The basic rule is that whenever you submit a story, you should rate it based on who can read it. For example if there is ...

Can you believe it? [url]Jonas Brothers and Twilight Rule Kids Choice Awards[/url] And Twilight beat Harry Potter as well! EDIT: Sorry, I was in a bit of a rush writing ...

Hi Peanut, You are a marvelous writer. Your strong prose successfully paints a clear picture, giving us almost spooky chills down our spines. Only a couple of minor corrections and ...

Hey there wizkid :) You have a very intriguing start to your story here. I found it to be descriptive, but not overdone, and it read pretty well overall. The ...

Hey Dudette :) My, you do have an intriguing idea. All that remains is for you to make it into something great, because as much potential as this has, you ...

Avorpianikness, You seriously had me laughing with this piece. I've decided that the idea warrants a gold star. Let's take a look at some of the things we can work ...

What I meant about from someone's perspective is not necessarily using the "I". Actually, I don't like that most of the time. I mean, try writing in the third person ...

Hello there Blinkasy, Welcome to YWS. I hope that you have a good time with us over here, and I also hope that we can help each other grow in ...

Hey Amber, I just wrote an article about story building. I really hope that it helps. Here's the link: Good luck with the writing! :)

Building a story from scratch is quite a difficult task. In fact, many a time most of us writers find ourselves wondering what to write about. Few of us know ...

Hey Conrad :) I read this yesterday, but didn't have time to review it. I did however give you one of those lovely stars though. So, anyway, let's drop in ...

Hi Adnamarine, After such a great critique on the first part of the first chapter of Dreams of Giants, I'd be most grateful for a review on the second part: ...

Ah, an excellent new piece... Orpheus by Conrad Rice. I don't have time to review it tonight, so it'll have to wait until tomorrow. It's a really great piece though: ...

Over here the answer is a clear prose. I used to write poetry a lot, and still occasionally dabble in the murky fields of poetry ^_^, but I'd have to ...

Hi Lisa, Can you kindly review this for me: It's the second part of the first chapter of Dreams of Giants Thanks so much! :)