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  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    Hey there again, ;) When you get a chance, can you please do this for me? It's the next piece of Dreams of Giants. Thanks so much :) Have a ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rosey's reviews

    Hey Rosey, When you get a chance can you please do this for me. It's the next piece of Dreams of Giants. Thanks so much :) Have a great one!

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter Two, Part Two

    A gentle roar seemed to hold the Southern Dock hostage. It was abnormally busy, and people were scattered in all directions. Mintrow pushed his way through the crowds with Nareen ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: So, you think you can write?

    Helpful McHelpfulpants, yours is done. :) stelagineva, I'll see if I can get to yours tomorrow. ;)

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Court of Gilded Birds: cheeseball fantasy extraordinaire

    Helpful McHelpfulpants, I like the ring that username has to it. ;) It was glorious summer in the palace, though spring chill and dampness lingered on the city walls: the ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: So, you think you can write?

    Hi there, Sorry, it's taken me so long to get to these reviews, but I had no internet from Wednesday last week to last night. Anyway, I've done yours Magnus, ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Ink Catcher

    Hi there Magnus, :) I'm sorry about the delay here. Unfortunately, my internet was quite uncooperative for several days. So, here I am reviewing your story a little belatedly. The ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Ink Catcher

    Hi there Magnus, :) I'm sorry about the delay here. Unfortunately, my internet was quite uncooperative for several days. So, here I am reviewing your story a little belatedly. The ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mystic

    Hey Mimi :) Allow me to be your reviewer for today. Let's see what we can do with the piece, then. Lily watched as her best friend Logan scribbled something ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Test The New Chat!

    I love the new chat, although I have to say that the best part is the fact that the rest of YWS isn't so slow. :)

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Crystalline

    Hey there Ariani, As promised, here is my review. :) I have lived a long time. I don't necessarily see this as a bad first sentence, but the potential that ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Books please (again)

    Try the Sword of Shannara Trilogy by Terry Brooks. It's great fantasy. :) You might also try Trudi Canavan's The Black Magician Trilogy. It's pretty solid too.

    Apr 7, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rosey's reviews

    Hi Rosey, After your great critique on the first chapter of Dreams of Giants, can I ask you to please review these pieces: Dreams of Giants: Prologue: Chapter 1 Part ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What's On Your iPod?

    A couple of the things that I have on my iPod are: Deep Purple Led Zeppelin Dire Straits Foreigner Boston Coldplay Aerosmith Red Hot Chili Peppers Nirvana Santana Supertramp Pink ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Short Stories

    Hey there Terpsichore, Let's take your questions one by one shall we? 1)Is a short story easier than a novel? It depends. Sometimes it is easier to write, sometimes its ...

    Apr 6, 2009


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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