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  • WRFF Archive Re: Want a review, Do you? [Closed For Now]

    Okay Art, yours is done :) Anything more?

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Untouched

    Hey There Art Here is my promised review. If I'd known your piece was this short, I might even have been able to get it up by Friday. Hopefully though, ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Check How Much You've Grown

    Oh, here's mine: Hi There, This was quite an intriguing start to a piece of writing. There are several good images used throughout the passage, and this piece therefore has ...

    Jul 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Maiko of Gion

    Firstly Fox, I want to apologize about the delay on this. I'd actually written a review completely, when my computer suddenly gave up the ghost, and I lost the whole ...

    Jul 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Three New Mods!

    That's great! Congratulations all! :)

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Michael Jackson is dead

    I'm aware that I'll probably be the subject of multiple flames for this, but as much as I love Michael Jackson's music, I'm not convinced of his innocence. If he ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Maiko of Gion

    Hey there Fox Here is your requested review. :) I do hope that what I say now helps. I'm in a particularly good mood, so I'm going to take it ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Want a review, Do you? [Closed For Now]

    Okay, so here's the deal: I'm on holiday as of yesterday, so I have a bit of time to get some reviews done. If you would like a review, all ...

    Jun 27, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)

    Hey There Worx I'm sorry about the delay, but I just finished my last exam so I'm finally available. I did not enjoy this chapter quite as much as I ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Are You a Writer or a Reviewer

    There should really be a 'both' option, I think? Although I definately enjoy critiquing, writing comes out on top without a doubt. *nods* Writing is mah life. I think that ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    Yes, Scribe, I understand exactly what you are trying to do, however as this is your intent, you do not need to generalize as you have done: Even among other ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    Hey Scribe, I know you don't usually like exposing your characters too fast, but I think that with regard to Vanaman you've slightly compromised your credibility. By credibility I don't ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    Hi Scribe :) Before I start my review, I just wanted to apologize. I was away from the computer when you thanked me for the previous review. I wanted to ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Righteous Will - Part 1

    Scribe: It was, as is always the case, my pleasure to review your work. :) As far as the vampire issue goes, I would not disagree with C.S. Lewis's advice. ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: My hand writing

    I love this Bolt. The green ink isn't quite blue, and the Arial font is certainly not too close to Arial, but other than that, marvelous! :D

    Jun 15, 2009


Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr