Master_Yoda

Hey Jojo :) To be perfectly honest, I didn't get much out of reading this piece. You write a fair prose, and make few mistakes as far as perspective goes. ...

I think what Dream_Catcher meant is Featured Works, Pengu. If this is what you meant, Dream_Catcher, here's what you do: :arrow: Go into My YWS by clicking on the second ...

Crouching Tuna -- I think you should start this as a separate thread if you want to get good response. Sometimes people just read the first post in the thread ...

Hey WritingWords, I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. Welcome to YWS, and I'm sure you'll do great here. Points are basically a YWS currency. You earn them by posting reviews ...

So, I'm back after reading all the other pieces you've got up. To be perfectly honest, I didn't find the second episode quite as impressive as I did the first. ...

Hey Fledge :) I've never reviewed a script before, but there's a first for everything, I guess. There were just one or two lines here that really proved to be ...

Hey Tigerwolf! So, I thought I would be nice and review this since I've had it open in my browser for a couple of days. Karsten gave you one truly ...

Catching plot bunnies? Why, set enough traps, and the bunnies will drop right into them. What I mean by setting traps is looking around at whatever occasion and asking the ...

I'm glad I could help. Actually, I dug this piece out of your portfolio when I noticed one of your reviews on another piece and went through your profile. I ...

Hi there Jetpack :) So, you want some harsh criticism? I'll do my utmost best, but you make very few mistakes. Let me first draw your attention to the title ...

Perhaps my biggest problem is physical description. I'm always afraid to describe what a character looks like for fear that it will seem info-dumpy. As a result, my writing appears ...

Carly and Tori are 100% right about it being fine. Not only is it fine, however, it's actually encouraged. For maximum penetration, you should refer to a character exactly as ...

I chose cats because they're stay out of your hair less.... But personally I think human slaves are more appropriate than using animals to do your dirty work.

I don't know why everyone else reading this thinks it's so bad. Personally I think I'll give it a gold star. :) At any rate. I specifically liked the name ...

I'm glad I could help. :)