Master_Yoda

Yo Jack, (I hope you don't mind me calling you that.) I would have to agree with you. Torturing your characters is the singularly most effective way to get your ...

The fireplace in the inn flickered with a small flame. It crackled, emitting the potent whiff of burning wood into the air. Miana felt the feeling slowly return to her ...

Hey Alter!Ego I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. I will be your reviewer for today, so I do help that I am able to provide some valuable input. I'm not ...

Granted, but it loves bringing dead rats into the house and putting them under your sheets as a surprise for you when you get to bed. I wish for a ...

Yo Hero Here are some of my thoughts on the second part of the chapter: :arrow: First person narration: So, the first thing that struck me weird in the chapter ...

Yo Fledge! I still didn't find myself with quite as much tension as I did in the first episode. It seems almost like there's no reason to read further. I ...

I once wrote an article on building your story. If you want to take a look at it, it can be found here: I hope the above helps. You can ...

Yo Dash :) Kind of new, huh? Well welcome nonetheless. I am pleased to make your acquaintance. :) Now, let us deal with your question: You post a review exactly ...

What an interesting name. So, you're new, huh? We don't welcome newbies here. Actually I lie, Welcome to YWS, usually famous person... I am certain that your magnificent fame will ...

4/10 -- It might have been higher, but since we did that poem at school, you lose 6 marks. :P

Welcome to you GreenGiraffe (I don't speak Japanese, I hope you don't mind ;)) You may or may not know it, but you've just joined the most awesome of writing ...

Hey there, SplitPin, So here is my promised review. I hope it will assist you somewhat in getting the best out of your story. :) So, honestly, I think this ...

I agree with what you say. I just thought I'd add another point: Most people who write fan-fiction utilize a world and characters that have already been created. This means ...

I suggest just putting in (pi r ^ 2) into the center of the rainbow, to indicate that it is indeed a full circle rather than a semicircle. Also, perhaps ...

Yo, Hero, or should I say Terry Pratchett of the future, I thought that seeing as this piece really appealed to me, I'd drop in with a review. :) You're ...