Master_Yoda

Yo Fledge :) I actually don't think this was your worst bit at all. I think this is what I'd been waiting to see. Ted starting to really mess with ...

Action Sequences One of the most common issues I see while critiquing stories is the lack of action in the action scenes. I therefore decided to put together an article ...

The dock resumed its hustle and bustle not long after the second murder of the day had disrupted it. It was impossible, Mintrow, thought, to go anywhere without one of ...

Interesting, Thunder, I often find said to be the most effective of dialogue tags as readers just skim over it. When you want readers to focus on the dialogue itself, ...

Yo Vern This was actually a pretty awesome article to read. It was informing and well written. Like Fledge, though, I felt that you could have spent a little more ...

I don't know what to say Fledge, but I gave you a gold star. It is very rare that a short story leaves me so speechless. I have one or ...

So, NewHero, let's give you a bit of a review. I'm in an orderly mood, so let's start at the beginning. :arrow: Hooks: Hi there, my name is Eric. I've ...

The First Person Narrative It's interesting to note that many beginner story-tellers tend to instinctively write their stories from a first person perspective – that is that they tell the ...

EP, I'm sure you'll get over it one day. If you take some good painkiller, I have no doubt that your eyes will start to feel better. But more seriously, ...

Good Omens -- Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaiman It's awesomeness! :)

Yo TNG I'm Yoda, and will try provide you with a bit of help on your story. So, I guess the first thing that we start off with should be ...

So: :arrow: Squall for inventing the first paragraph game. :arrow: Explosive Pen: The most awesome competitor for the game first paragraph game ever! :arrow: JustDance, Becki, Bolt, Phoenix, Ace, Cott

I do believe that the advice given in the poem is some of the best I have ever heard for a young writer. We don't need bull, we don't need ...

Yo everyone! I thought the plot was amazing Interesting, Wookie, even most of the people who I know who love Twilight don't comment on the effectiveness of the plot. But ...

Yo Hero Here's my promised review. :) So, I liked this chapter. A lot. Your introduction of a new character sort of revived a large amount of your charm that ...