Master_Yoda

This, good Rosey, is a really marvelous piece. Let's do some line by line stuff: The floor shimmers as light filters in through the water above. I rather like this ...

Yo Zerk, Here's my promised review. I do hope that you find it useful. The voice of your narrator is what really drew my attention to this piece. It is ...

Orson Scott Card is officially one of my favorite authors. In fact, while I love Ender's Game, what is even more impressive is his book Speaker for the Dead which ...

The room looked slightly hazy through his tears. The single bed was made with neatly folded sheets, and on the wall a single painting hung. The painting was of a ...

Hi Joshua Paul :) Occasionally I read a story on YWS which is so good that I just have to comment. This was one of them. From the very first ...

Yo Rosey, It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours, so I thought that since I really liked this piece I'd drop in with a quick critique. :) ...

I haven't read this, but I intend to buy myself several of Sanderson's books for myself at the first opportunity. Everything I've read of his is awesome. He's got that ...

Hey Hero, Here's my promised review: Honestly I think this premise of yours is awesome. You have perfectly captured my attention, offering just enough mystery to make me ask the ...

Skybreaker wasn't bad. I mean I liked the premise to a certain extent but the author, Oppel, did a couple of really stupid things like making that gas Hydrium smelling ...

Well, I would comment about the Twilight religion except for this: But at least us Star Wars fans have a sense of humor. :P

Cracking Climaxes There are those rarer books that pull you in, slowly building you up to a massive epic showdown. This “showdown” is ultimately the piece of the book that ...

I noticed that as well. :) I also noticed that GryphonFledgling's great new fiction piece has 9 gold stars and hasn't seemed to have made it to the featured works. ...

Okay, I'm not 100% sure about this, but I'm getting the feeling that the Featured Works section is only looking at the poetry forums. I don't remember seeing a story ...

Yo Hero! :) Here's my promised review of the revised piece. :arrow: Info-dump: So the first thing that I think when reading this piece is "Information Dump". You come in ...

Yo Dog! After your very helpful review on part of my story Dreams of Giants, I thought I'd return the favor. Epic Fantasy! One of my favorite genres. Let's get ...