Master_Yoda

Yo YWS A year ago, I stumbled upon you, only to find myself still stuck here. Drugs are addictive. You are much more than a drug. Must tear myself away... ...

Happy Birthday, Demetoid :)

You, good Galerius, are a marvelous writer. Here is your requested review. Your characters are strong, your story line is strong and your prose is enchanting. In fact, your piece ...

Chapter 8 As her fist hit the headboard she woke up. Her head pounded with bursts of pain. The nightmare had been all too vivid. She sat up, quickly feeling ...

Hi Tigs :) Thanks for the edit. :) Let's start with your prose. You write a fairly easy to read story which flows and is quite entertaining. This easy style ...

Worst opening line ever = "Hi, my name is Mary and I'm a very pretty girl with blonde hair and blue eyes. Otherwise, I guess you could say that I'm ...

Honestly, while I found the book to be a somewhat enjoyable read, I found it weighed down with certain baggage that did not allow the book to reach its potential. ...

Yo Rebz :) Reading the start of this story made me rather happy. Immediately visible is your potential as a writer. Your story is by no means flawless, but it's ...

Just got to add an additional book that I've read since. Ursula K. Le Guin has a book entitled Lavinia that is a fantasy set in Trojan times. It's a ...

So, Antigone has already given you a pretty awesome review. I think I should just emphasize the tense and lack of description issues. Compared with when you first joined YWS, ...

I do believe that it is Science Fiction. The fact that the force is not explained is by no means indicative of the fact that it is something magical. In ...

Now we're talking! What left me completely befuddled and bemused was what happened to Dream Kim. We suddenly decided that we were going to ignore her and focus on Ted ...

Hey Rosey, I saw your blog entry and decided to come see if I could be of assistance. :). Now, I'm going to start off by saying that I think ...

Yo Fledge :) So, the plot thickens. :) We now know that Mr Cat and the Teddy Bear are doing something rather strange. We just don't know what yet. I ...

What a deep and profound poem. The fact that the word "shy" rhymes with the word "why" is in and of itself an anomaly. The usage of uppercase further conveys ...