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Re: Imminence
Hi there, Wow, I've been out of the reviewing business for a while, but Reviewing Sunday has stepped the pressure up, so I guess I'm here. So, this isn't much ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Where'd your username come from?
I made my name up. Seriously. Nobody has been called Master_Yoda yet to date. So, no inspiration really.
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: What Do You Like About YWS?
Something else: Pat Buchanan.
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Pain- Prologue *REVISED*
Hi Isha :) Here is a bit of a review for your story to add to your collection. I hope that it helps. The main problem that I have with ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Medusa
Hey Elinor :) This is one of the only times that I've reviewed poetry, so I apologize if the review's not up to scratch. For me, poetry is defined by ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: First Flight
Hello there Kanen, I thought I'd drop by to give your piece a quick review. So, a writing exercise... Turn yourself into a bird and see how realistically you can ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Coming Soon: YWS News
You, good Nate, have put me in a rather good mood. :D I can't wait!
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Trent Aether and the Secrets of Mount Olympus (Chapter 1)
Hi Hero So, this will probably be a pretty short review as I haven't read Percy Jackson. I'm going to focus purely on the stylistic elements of your writing. Your ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted
Hi Kanen, I'm sorry this is so late, but it's the first chance I've got. The problem that is most visible in this piece is the fact that your characters ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Member Interview
Oooh! Do me! :D AM I the only one to laugh at this? :) I confess to sharing your perverted mind, Ben.
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: What do I do with all my points?!?!?!
You should donate all your points to the Kamas Point Bank. Yup. ^^ This.
Feb 11, 2010 -
Re: Of Jinn and Devil
Hi There Worx :) I haven't spoken to you in ages. Glad to see you around. Here's the review: I don't know how long I'll have, but I'll start off ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: A dark hero chapter one
Hi there I haven't reviewed for a while and I'm very pressed for time so forgive me if this isn't comprehensive. Let's start with your characterization because that's what struck ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Interesting. I found that the tenses need a little more interplay to be able to truly bring out the spooky tone that you'd want to create for a piece like ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas
Congratulations ;)
Dec 6, 2009
