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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Imminence

    Hi there, Wow, I've been out of the reviewing business for a while, but Reviewing Sunday has stepped the pressure up, so I guess I'm here. So, this isn't much ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Where'd your username come from?

    I made my name up. Seriously. Nobody has been called Master_Yoda yet to date. So, no inspiration really.

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Official Polls Re: What Do You Like About YWS?

    Something else: Pat Buchanan.

    Apr 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Pain- Prologue *REVISED*

    Hi Isha :) Here is a bit of a review for your story to add to your collection. I hope that it helps. The main problem that I have with ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Medusa

    Hey Elinor :) This is one of the only times that I've reviewed poetry, so I apologize if the review's not up to scratch. For me, poetry is defined by ...

    Mar 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: First Flight

    Hello there Kanen, I thought I'd drop by to give your piece a quick review. So, a writing exercise... Turn yourself into a bird and see how realistically you can ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Coming Soon: YWS News

    You, good Nate, have put me in a rather good mood. :D I can't wait!

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Trent Aether and the Secrets of Mount Olympus (Chapter 1)

    Hi Hero So, this will probably be a pretty short review as I haven't read Percy Jackson. I'm going to focus purely on the stylistic elements of your writing. Your ...

    Mar 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted

    Hi Kanen, I'm sorry this is so late, but it's the first chance I've got. The problem that is most visible in this piece is the fact that your characters ...

    Mar 5, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Member Interview

    Oooh! Do me! :D AM I the only one to laugh at this? :) I confess to sharing your perverted mind, Ben.

    Mar 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What do I do with all my points?!?!?!

    You should donate all your points to the Kamas Point Bank. Yup. ^^ This.

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Of Jinn and Devil

    Hi There Worx :) I haven't spoken to you in ages. Glad to see you around. Here's the review: I don't know how long I'll have, but I'll start off ...

    Jan 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A dark hero chapter one

    Hi there I haven't reviewed for a while and I'm very pressed for time so forgive me if this isn't comprehensive. Let's start with your characterization because that's what struck ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    Interesting. I found that the tenses need a little more interplay to be able to truly bring out the spooky tone that you'd want to create for a piece like ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas

    Congratulations ;)

    Dec 6, 2009


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