Master_Yoda

Hey Rosey I finally got your review posted. Sorry it took so long but I hope it helps. Feel free to post again, and I'll critique that piece as well. ...

Hi Rosey, Yay, it's been a while since I had one of your pieces to review. Thanks for the request. :) I'm going to break my review down into steps ...

Her mind was open as a steel door bolted shut with a sign upon it declaring -Keep Out!-

Welcome back! I do remember seeing some me your posts around. Nice to have another Star Wars person around. As for the age thing, YWS has no upper limit any ...

Hope this helps:

6/10

Hey Bro, You have a story with great potential here. It has the potential for terrifying horror that might shake even Chuck Norris's boots. Well not Chuck Norris, but almost ...

Hi Madcapper, I'm Yoda and would like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you'll both gain a great deal from, and contribute a great deal to the site. Now, ...

Hi Ranger This is an interesting one to review. I feel tempted to comment on the style, but will keep that section brief to allow me to focus on critiquing ...

Someone's going to say it so it might as well be me. The answer to your question is: 42

Freaking awesome! XD

Hi there, Welcome to YWS, and have a blast of a time. It's a pleasure to meet you. If there's anything I can help with, let me know. Now that ...

Thanks everyone. :) Very nice to meet you Pessimistic character. :)

Yours is done too, Skins :) Hope it was okay.

You're an awesome storyteller, Skins. I'm sorry it's taken so long to get around to reviewing your piece, but I ran into some unexpected trouble trying to get University applications ...