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  • WRFF Archive Re: Storytelling Reviews

    Yours is done, Jas! :)

    Aug 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Winterland.

    Here's your requested review: You remind me very much of myself a while back, Jasmine. I wrote a piece entitled Abuse that I still have somewhere on this website. *goes ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The only way (Edited)

    You reviewed my flash fiction, so I am here to reciprocate. Okay, so flash fiction is in my opinion the most difficult type of writing there is. With 150 words ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lights and Colors

    A/N: I'm considering entering this into a competition. The word limit is 250 words. Let me know what you think... Lights and Colors Neon lights told the story of our ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Raw Art

    Does A+ mean that you were graded an A+ for this piece? If so, you deserved it. The piece is a fluid and well structured study that although somewhat imprecise ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Vote For Top-100 Science Fiction, Fantasy Titles

    Of course I've read Kay. I pride myself in my breadth and to leave someone so important off my list would be scandalous. I voted: LotR, The Dispossessed by Le ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Vote For Top-100 Science Fiction, Fantasy Titles

    There were three Le Guin's that I remember on the list. The Dispossessed, Left Hand of Darkness, and I can't remember what the last one was. It wasn't Earthsea, though.

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Vote For Top-100 Science Fiction, Fantasy Titles

    It's an epic list. They even remembered obscure greats like Alfred Bester and Guy Gavriel Kay. Go vote!

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear Period

    Sheesh, makes me grateful I'm not a girl.

    Aug 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: DELETED

    So, this story is actually not meant to be emotionally charged and Octave's wonderful review leaves me trying to work out why it didn't come across as the piece it ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    I wanted to let you know that there is a giant bug in chat. Whenever someone innocently posts an "xD" or "XD" the following appears on the screen: "I dropped ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The July 2011 Review Day Check-In Thread

    I did three reviews more than freakforchrist . I'm epic like that.

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Prophecy Maker

    Hello Berlynn Before I begin my review I want to request on behalf of myself and perhaps a whole bunch of other people that you go through your story and ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Epsilon: Triple Threat

    Hey Sage, I rarely give such compliments as this: I believe that you stand a good chance of getting a contract in a few years if you keep on working ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Isobel's Regret

    Hi Amelia, You write a clear and well defined prose. You manage to paint your character's emotions quickly too. Nevertheless, I think that the basic idea you had here was ...

    Jul 31, 2011


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