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Re: The Insult the Person above you unless he is Yoda thread
The rules are as follows. Insult the person above you unless his username is Master_Yoda, in which case you should compliment him.
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Storytelling Reviews
Pettybage is done, joshuapaul, you're next.
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: dark fantasy suspense/sci-fi thriller
Hi Pettybage I am back with the review on the rest of what you posted that I have now officially finished. Interestingly, enough I really liked the story overall and ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Creature (approx. 4700 words)
Hey Dreamworx and Pettybage, I've been really busy and have a little time to respond now, so here goes. Firstly, DW, I want to make it abundantly clear that I ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: The Official "Omg, I got my name changed!" thread
I was freakforchrist. Now I'm Master_Yoda.
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Creature (approx. 4700 words)
Hi Dreamworx, I hadn't read your writing in ages before this. You still write a fluid prose, focus strongly on character conflict, have a bunch of interesting imagery and metaphors ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Who would Skandar Keynes prefer?
He'd love you both. As I understand it, Skandar Keynes has a particular affinity for freaks.
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Are you planning on purchasing the Journal?
No. I already bought it.
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: YWS Invades Russia
Holographic Transmission Master Yoda / Mace Windoo (Russian Secret Service) "Received Confirmation, I have," said Yoda. "I felt no disturbance in the force," Mace Windoo replied. "Look inside, you mus
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
Epilogue: After a while of hanging out with their girlfriends, Fluffy-bunny worked out that many of them were in fact either homosexual or female. What resulted, was an understanding that ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
So, with Advanced Critiques, I get an extra 50% for every review I post because the site seems to think they're all first reviews. The reviews also don't seem to ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: dark fantasy suspense/sci-fi thriller
Hi Pettybage This is a review of chapters 6 and 7. I am going to start with the scene of the heebie-jeebies attack. I know all you tried to do ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: dark fantasy suspense/sci-fi thriller
Hi Pettybage This is a review of the first five chapters, and it deals with my response to the story so far and how you have written it. Your style ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Report a good member!
Okay, so I really am never going to do justice here, but I need to do this anyhow. In no particular order, Rosey Unicorn -- for reading almost anything I ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: YWS Invades Russia
Master Yoda Jedi Master of the highest order The force and hydrogen bombs Green obviously. Code name: John Smith. EDIT: Oh, I forgot to tell you, I am so not ...
Aug 16, 2011
