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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Moustache

    Hmm, not bad The whole piece just reminded me of Pedro from napoleon dynamite The backlash led to this. I didnt like this line, it just didnt feel right. It's ...

    Feb 15, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: War Protestors

    yeah, okay. it's quite good. apart from the paragraphing which you explained) the only thing that came to mind was how you said these people were viewed as un-american, but ...

    Feb 17, 2005


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien