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Re: That one lunch.
Okay, this is not bad; I think it has a lot of potential, but there are a few things it needs. It needs more meat! We don't really know much ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Best Thing About you
Awwww that's so sweet! I really like this poem. It's very lovely. :smt050 Just one thing I want to point out. It is not how your perfectly-shaped lips That is ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: The Imaginary Prologue
This is good. I like the mystery of it. I agree with Esther Sylvester; there's not a lot to review because it's a prologue. Perhaps go more into the main ...
Jun 23, 2010