MaryQuiteContrary

Yikes! I certainly feel bad for the girl in the story, but I think she may have taken things too far. The desperation is evident. I would have liked her ...

I've had a few of those and they are always bittersweet. I pine away for what could have been, what I felt should have been. Sometimes, though, it's best. You ...

Ugh, I'm sorry, that really sucks. On the bright side you managed to encompass an entire young person's life in one dramatic encounter. I get the feeling that anything else ...

There's a couple of spelling errors: With the knowledge that I know posses Not bad but they're right up front and it made me look for others. For me some ...

I like this poem. It definitely captures the transition from child to adult nicely. One thing that brought me out a bit was the change from first person here: At ...