Mars

O_O I only just heard about Farah Fawcett and Michael Jackson. This is ridiculous. Conspiracy theorists, go!

We had the world at our fingertips, love-- neither sky nor ground could hold us. With wings that birds would be jealous of, we flew and danced like lovers must. ...

Hello :) The beginning of this chapter is a little confusing, mainly because you don't tell us what the setting is. At work the next morning, on the phone that ...

I fail. Epically. I'm sorry. I could feel my face light up, not knowing how to stop them. What's the 'them'? That should be referring to Merry's face, the subject ...

Hi! And silk and perfume This is a really tiny suggestion but I think you should have a period there, because you had one with rosary and it's a bit ...

Hi! MAJOR APOLOGIES for taking so long to review this. I've had some other stuff going on and school's just about to finish but anyway, here I am now. :) ...

Could you review my poem? If you can get around to it that is. =D Thanks!

I suck. Because I was totally going to review this earlier. But I didn't. Sorry >< I'm not sure how useful I can be though, because I think mainly the ...

Hi :) Just a few things I wanted to point out; overall I really like this poem, but I think there are some odd bits. That’s what I’d let you ...

Wow, Jared. This is - well, I'm not sure how to describe it but it's certainly good writing. Wonderful writing. Every little section was well done, very different, but well ...

If I could leave you I'd break free unlock my door and throw the key into the crashing waves below - escape from truths that I well know are truly ...

=O 7. Edinburgh, UK *high fives beckiw*

I memorized my member number ages ago. xD

I report April (peanutgallery007) for not only being a great member of the site but also a really nice and caring friend.