Mars

this is great, because that's one of my favorite songs. and the picture makes me think of a story.

Well. It's not bad for two minutes, but honestly.. it's not good. I am shot with a thousand arrows... Going right through my still beating heart, This line is not ...

hi! if you could critique my poem i'd be eternally grateful!!! cheers

this is excellent! my history teacher had us do something like this as well, but not about mitosis of course. :lol:

oh mon dieu. this is really amazing. i loved the imagery. i think it is really beautiful. you go from roses to stars to black holes to cosmic dust (nice ...

It failed you and it failed me. LOVED that line. The day started normal Just like any other day The rain fell without a breath But the tree fell anyway ...

i don't think i can find much to say that hasn't already been said, except that it actually seems kind of in the stephanie meyer-style (author of twilight). i don't ...

i should not be on here. BECAUSE instead of doing my extremely important biology homework, i spent two hours writing a short story :D i'm never leaving again. i forgot ...

On my bicycle, I transcend categories! Tell me, officer, am I slow pedestrian, meandering through life, or am I noisy automobile, fogging up the air? And, oh please, you know ...

wow. wow. this was really great, really original. the only thing i would change maybe is when you say "his literacy master plan" it seems kind of weird, and i'm ...

Have you ever smoked meat? [My teacher: Oh yeah, it gets me sooooooooo high.]

I liked this. Yeah, the title did make me think of an emo song or poem, but I clicked on it anyway and I'm glad. I love how descriptive you ...

Author's note: I don't know if I should continue this, or just leave it as it is. Anyway, comment on what you think, and please give me feedback, I need ...

2-3 were fantastic, I especially liked 3. Have you ever tried tonkas? They're sort of like haiku, a bit longer though.

I'm jealous you can write like that and I'm jealous you can surf. I love it. Just wish it was longer, so I could read more.