Mars

Wh-hoo, alliteration! I am so psyched that you like Redwall! I grew up on those too. Anyway, welcome to the site :) Can't wait to read some of your work!

I really liked this poem! Mostly I loved the imagery. There were a couple things I didn't understand (it's probably just me :P): When the sun rises, I think it's ...

Edited. I changed a few things and added a bit. Thanks for the reviews, guys!

Thanks everyone for the reviews! @lavabubblingout: I did capitalize it. About the "sk i p s" line, I actually meant to do that-I get an interesting sound inside my head ...

Totally F***d in your pants (yes, that's totally a real song.)

Pretty, pretty please?:smt064

Well. Okay. I love grammar. I really do. It's excellent and I know how annoying it is when people don't use it. However...I just don't like my poetry capitalized. It's ...

AHHH COMMA SPLICE!!! yes. i will definitely fix that. :D About the mask line: I see what you mean. I like 'mask' because it's one syllable, so I thought it ...

Demeter: um, Miliam? Miriem? This is going to bother me!!! My first name is six letters and ends in an E.

My hand's right there- right on it- and I can feel it pulsing and throbbing like something about to explode beneath my fingers, which are trembling, by the way, because ...

Hello! I really liked this piece. I would tell you to continue it but you said you will! Also, this being the introduction, it's kind of hard to critique the ...

Demeter: Sandi Miriam? The others...I have NO IDEA.

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Favorite(s): delicatessen & vacuum Least favorite: well

6/10 Peanuts are the second-worst kind of nut.