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Yes please! (you're amazing and I love you!) Thanks! It's kind of short, but there's plenty of things for me to fix, I just don't know them yet.

I don't have a lot to say, since Face Engine pretty much said it all already. I agree with him. It's a good poem, but not remarkable. The only thing ...

Haha I like this a lot. I especially like the last two lines. No suggestions (:

[s]*bows down to the critiquing queen bee that is Snoink* Name: Don't Fret Genre: Romantic Fiction Summary: It's kind of an essay about a silly, silly boy. Word count: 907 ...

I liked this a lot--can't really say anything that hasn't already been said :D Except, I assume you did this while reworking it, it should be shift of an eye.

I liked this a lot. It gets a gold star. I really don't have any suggestions--your descriptions are beautiful, especially the guy's eyes, and I was afraid the fire part ...

This poem was okay but too repetitive-you're repeating the same things over and over without changing more than two or three words, and I found it a little tiresome to ...

I guess everyone has their own “one that got away.” He was mine and he always would be. Stupid trivial high school flames, with their stupid attractions and attachments and ...

Sorry-reading it again I realize my first post was really vague. No, I got what the first two were. I thought by "imaginary relationships" you meant something like imaginary friends, ...

I liked this piece a lot. It's really original and witty and enjoyable. My only criticism is that, while your beginning was fun, I was really confused about the imaginary ...

I like this poem-it's kind of an overused subject, so you have to make it original and I think you did a good job of that. Stained by her black, ...

Actually, I like your dialogue. This is realistic fiction, so you should portray your characters realistically (which you do). Part two! Yes! Here are a few suggestions (mostly writing or ...

I'm in desperate need of some new music! So, I was hoping some of you excellent people could reply to this with favorite singers/bands. I would prefer UK music, but ...

Welcome Dan (and all other new members)!

Oops, I think you posted a new topic instead of replying to one. Where's a moderator when you need them? :P