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Banned for having an avie from a Disney movie (right?)

Banned for having the squiggly in your signature.

Hello! (your name means the queen, right? Very cool :)) Welcome to YWS! I think Lily and Night Mistress covered the important rules, soooo....here are some smilies! :twisted: :oops: :? ...

Hey kloka! Since this piece is unfinished, it's a little hard to review. But here I go. I like the concept that you have here, and I think you could ...

Interesting dilemma: love and words, or love for words, as fancy dictates such. Both as exciting as soaring birds, who love flying, I dare say, just as much. But whom ...

Pink and Counting Crows makes you cool. But Avril Lavigne? Really? 7/10 1. Crush crush crush by Paramore 2. The Bad Touch by Blood Hound Gang 3. Cut Short by ...

I used to be/still sort of am really self-conscious about myself, but the other day I was just thinking that I should try to feel more comfortable in my own ...

Thanks for this thread, Snoink. I'd like to post this ad I found on YWS (no, it's not the createspace guy): In case you can't read it, it says "You're ...

Holy [expletive] This stunned me. It was touching, and cute, sometimes, and a bit creepy (in a good way) and I really shouldn't be surprised since you're the author but ...

Wow, short and sweet. I have a couple things to point out, but overall it's pretty good. :) When I was six years old I dropped a glass plate on ...

@Monstrar: Thanks! @Nolan: Yeah, I agree. It was sort of one those, 'I'm just going to put words on the page' things, so I didn't think about format so much. ...

Charizard, I choose you! I had to include a Pokemon reference. I really choose CastlesInTheSky (Sarah) because she's so nice and JFW1415 because she gave me a really helpful critique.

"Hon, I don't know where you do more acting. On stage or offstage or backstage or what." My therapist said that to me after the umpteenth time I paid her ...

Well, this doesn't need tearing apart. I actually liked it a lot-could only find one thing to nit-pick: I take to sitting underneath my attic window, I don't like how ...

Clo: Instructors, assemble! Power of, overwhelming liberalism! BigBadBear: Power of, crappy internet connection! Kylan: Power of, excessive metaphor! Connie: Power of, gender confusion! Suzanne: So, i