Mars

I fully agree. Snoink is maximum excellence.

Thanks a lot, guys. All the reviews are really helpful! Umm...I deleted the part that corresponds to the title. So I need a new one. But I have no ideas...*nudge ...

*puppy dog eyes* Please: Predicament Other poetry It's my first I'm not too confident about it. A thousand thank you's!

Oh! Really good improvements! The first two stanzas are now my favorites. *clicks gold star button*

I rocked out my ACTs this morning! Now I just need to sleep...

Never heard of it. TPBM is reading this.

Hi, I'm reviewing your poem :) First off, I do want to say that I think this poem is really good, it just needs a couple of reviews; so bear ...

This reads more like a blog entry than a poem. Try breaking it up a bit for emphasis instead of using capital letters. Also, you're telling, not really showing. Inject ...

Hey, brag. That's awesome! So if the SAT doesn't count, it's practice? or is it an entrance exam to the talent search? Either way, don't freak too much. Just get ...

Hiya! I have the pleasure of reviewing your work tonight. :) *breathes in that new poem smell* Okay. Here we go. There will come a time when the world will ...

Hey Lisa! Welcome to YWS. Trust me, it's addicting. Just to let you know, the general rule at YWS is to keep the ratio of reviews to work at least ...

Hello Mercury! Welcome to YWS. I'm Carrie and I'm reviewing your poem :) Wow, this poem is super-long, can't wait to really get into it *cracks knuckles* Before I begin, ...

Actually, I would have thought you were an Edward fan if you hadn't edited it :D. Haha, I didn't know there were actually nicknames-Twihard and Twihater. I'm a Twi...nothing.

Inari?

Grossness. TPBM is ten feet tall.