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Hey hobbes. I get to critique your poem. I loved it. It's funny and original (a refreshing break from the depression poems we seem to get all the time) so ...

Nutty, thanks for the review. I agree with your wording suggestions-I'll edit it soon. And yes, there is a reason for the beat, you'll see. :) Thanks Eraqio too. I ...

Hiya. I'm reviewing your piece (obviously). I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes, and I couldn't really concentrate on the storyline, so I'm just going to point those out: His ...

It's the first part, I haven't posted the rest yet, but it's kind of introductory, so I just really need help on descriptions, wording, etc. Thanks a lot!

Hey Sarah, I'm back for another review ;-) Title: Doctor/Mister Vanderguard-Milton Link: Genre: Other Fiction It's the first part. So the plot has not developed at all yet-what I really ...

...gone! For submission.

Nope! not Hayley. Good guess though.

Banned because I think you're nuts.

I found this survey about books, so I wanted to post it and here all your guys' answers. 1.Total number of books you own? 2.What was the last book you ...

I got a spam email for the Snuggie. THEY'RE EVERYWHERE. o.O

Hi :) I think your plot is pretty good and I'm excited to see what happens! So for this review I'll just point out a few icky grammar things: Quote: ...

Jenny? (does 'y' count?)

Banned for singling yourself out.

"Hugh blows the yucca pollen off his blackened shrimp while I push back the sleeves of my borrowed sport coat and serach the meat tower for my promised potatoes." -from ...

Rodeo, no question. That would be freakin' tight. Would you rather kill or be killed, assuming neither person did anything wrong?