Mars

I like this...it's a fairly overused subject, which some YWSers will crucify you for, but I think you've written about it well, so kudos. I do have a few suggestions: ...

Ohhh....you got me. I'll bite. And I will bite *evil laugh; cracks knuckles* Trapped in these four walls, Not knowing where to turn, There is nothing left for me, At ...

Sorry, but I can hardly come up with titles for my own stuff. I am itching to critique this...and I will, if you post it in one of the other ...

Hey Stephixy! I don't know why no one has reviewed this yet....but they haven't. So it's up to me. :shock: Hope you don't want to kill me by the end ...

Hi! I'm KTW and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Drifting on soft clouds, Lies a city of love. Its frantic heart beat is that of a family. 'heartbeat' is ...

I'm totally doing this. Starting today, Friday the 19th...perfect timing, since it's winter break. *off to the literature forums*

Did you mean that your VP girl has a very big ego and feels much too good to have physical contact of whatever type with this individual? Yes. Exactly. Not ...

I like it, but I feel like it would be better in context. :D 8/10

arrogance is no excuse I walked in the halls waltzed, really, in and out of consciousness observing or not observing or waking up or sleep walking or just walking. He ...

Banned for banning someone for playing the game.

I love all of those. Except for 2, because I don't know it. I saw 5 in concert. :D 9/10 1. Wine Red - Hush Sound 2. Caring is Creepy ...

Banned for calling someone a hypocrite, when everyone is a hypocrite.

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Miyazawa? Miyazaki?

Banned for living in fantasy.