Mars

Banned because Disney is the bomb.

I'm a shift-er. And yes, it is annoying, though I have done it (especially in poetry; Snoink, you're so right!) But does anyone else have certain letters that they really ...

Hey there, YWSers! I am desperate need of pieces to critique, so I'm hoping some of you can help me out. I will critique: ~any poetry ~any fiction ~this includes ...

Hiya! Thanks bunches.

Hello to you too! I'm ktw and I'll be reviewing this poem...even if you don't pay much attention to it :) Hey there! This one is about how I feel ...

*points to above post* Nooooo!!!!! I was going to tell you to omit all your commas!! :D Okay, anyway, I liked this poem a lot-I thought you worded it well, ...

Ah...sorry. I would if I could, but it's too good to be ripped apart. I really liked this-I think you did an excellent job. On everything. Just one suggestion: Jaded ...

This was great. I'm a sucker for narrative songs, and third-person songs, so I really loved this. So, I can't find that much wrong with it and this review probably ...

Seriously? No one has reviewed this yet? I think that there are parts of this poem that definitely need work, but I was in a playful mood this morning, so ...

Hey beemarie425! I'm kissthewitch and I'll be reviewing your poem today. :) First, two little things: The sunset creates a halo on your hair The pieces of my heart shed ...

Another poem about my Dad for my American Lit. class. I have yet to get a grade on it, but I'll keep everyone informed. I still consider this a draft..but ...

...gone! For submission.

Banned for second-guessing your signature.

Ex dee.

I hope mine is reliable enough. :) First off, I'm correcting all your grammar in bold. I called and then again I tried until the moon grew full I cried ...